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Personal Narrative Essay



 English 122: Writing the Personal Narrative Essay


Due Dates:
         Sept. 8 Tuesday Rough Draft
         Sept. 8 Tuesday Safe Assign Opens @ 11:55 AM to submit final draft
         Sept. 9 Wednesday Safe Assign Closes 11:55 PM Submit Final Draft  to Safe Assignment on Blackboard.
        Sept. 10 Thursday Hard copy due in class; 

Total Points: 50

Assignment:  Select a person, place, or event that has provided significant growth or insight into life, humanity, or yourself.  Recreate the memory for your readers in a narrative essay, telling the story so that the essay has a central idea or main point: a lesson learned, a lesson that you can teach your reader.  An important aspect of the remembering essay is to help readers gain some insight about themselves or the world around them. The essay will have a specific audience: parents, peers, teens, teachers, others

Length 3-4 pages, typed, double-spaced
Use MLA for documentation and page format

Include these elements in your narrative:
1.    A clearly stated thesis sentence
a      Character: To develop character: show your character in action describe your character; use dialogue to give insight into the character’s personality.

b     Setting: To develop setting, atmosphere, and mood: Imagine yourself in the place with your characters.  If you are the narrator, remember the setting or use specific names of places to give readers a sense of place.  Name your high school, parks, cities, specific locations to give readers a point of reference, to add meaning and detail to emphasize meaning
2.    A point of view: To develop point of view, decide what person you want your narrative in”
--1st person I
--2nd person “you” to address the audience—use this cautiously, for specific effect
--3rd person using the omnipotent narrator who knows all (especially if you want to conceal your identity or disassociate yourself with subject if your subject is highly personal in nature).  You will write in 3rd person (the mountain climbers)
3.    A dramatic situation: To develop a dramatic situation, show events happening rather that saying what happen.  A drama will have rising action, a climax, falling action
4.    A shaped Action: To developed that shaped action, narrative must have two elements

5. Purpose: the main idea, the message, the lesson
6. Climax: the point in the story where the conflict is resolved and the lesson has been learned

Essay Work Sheet:

√Recall event.  You may have to revisit the place: look at old photos, talk to others who share the memory.
√List important details

√List descriptive words that will vividly describe events and characters

√List the characters, including their outstanding characteristics: physical—the way they walk, their facial expression, favorite words, something distinctive about their character that gives insight into their personality, something that the reader will remember them by.

√What is the purpose of the essay?  What is the lesson that you learned?  How does the narrative teach or indicate that lesson.  What do you want your reader to gain from your essay?

√Ways to share that lesson:

Have a clearly stated thesis statement for the essay that states the purpose of the essay (the lesson learned or the lesson or message that you want your audience to learn and understand. Remember you are not just telling a story, you are writing an essay with a clear purpose and main idea

Write a title that will hint or even state the lesson

Explain what you learned in the introduction

Explain what you learned in the conclusion

Try to avoid the sentence: This is the lesson I learned . . .


Write your thesis sentence:

(example): Parents need to remember that their children learn and grow by taking chances.

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